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It's a very original idea to rap about animating, or actually about an animator. This could actually be used as the script for a movie, or a Newgrounds animation.
The voice is really suitable for rapping. It was a bit like a "gangsta" voice, it could almost be compared with Eminem's voice. A bit more feeling could be thrown in, though. It was quite boring to listen to a monotone voice for almost four minutes, but that does give the listener more time to consider and listen to what you're actually saying, the lyrics. The voice got a bit slow at times, though. Sometimes it didn't really match the beat.
The beat was cool, but got really lame after about 20 seconds. Try and variate the beat a bit more!
Overall
A very cool rap with a message that's worth tons of gold. The beat was good, but got repetitive really quickly, as did the voice. The voice was a bit out of sync with the beat, was really good on itself, but throw some more feeling in there.
Good message, but a lot could be improved on the rap itself.
Rev'd
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